Thread: Spite vs Kwell
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Old 11-01-04, 11:55 PM   #8
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Voted For: Spite

ok~nice short battle verses from both,you both had your strong points...
spite~you flow was good here,but your structure could use a little work,,but unimportant here because it was a short battle, your opener was strong, it was funny too,like the pres daughter line,,,,ahaha, you had good vocabulary and creativity in your verse,i liked how you tied in the presidential election,since it is so close,,,nice closer as well,you stayed on point throughout you verse, nice job...1
kwell~you had good flow in your verse, i liked your opener,it was one of your best bars,,i also liked the coin and dime line...nice wordplay,just thought you started fire,but kinda lost it towards the end line...but it was still a good verse...1
My vote goes to spite...due to creativity in his words and vocabulary......overall,nice one fellas..1
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