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Old 11-02-04, 03:54 AM   #3
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good battle both~
DV*~you definitely had some good multies, just not as many as omb, but your verse was great,and you had great flow in your verse as well, and good vocab...
omb~since this was a multi battle, you did have more, and great ones at that, your verse also flowed very well, it seemed like you were comfortable, and your verse never lost the emphasis, or lyrical content,it was good str9 thru,didnt fall off at all, sicne this was based on multies,i have to give this to omb, his verse explains it..but good job both!..1
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