Word, I liked this. Tupacs was great, I think that kid is elevating a lot since he started.. His quality was pretty good too. Good work pac..
Mad dog, your verse was good. Some things I can tell you, for starters your vocals, you needa work on making the flow sound natural, by using a lot of assonance and internals. Like when I rap, I do slur some words slightly to make them all connect as opposed to being articulate about every word and cutting off. Also I felt as though you were rapping quietly.. When ya go to a studio, your gonna have to be rapping a lot louder and utalising ya voice compleatly. So you should try recording on your mic and projecting your voice a little more.
But overall, I liked this track. And it was a dope idea man.. Good shit..