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Old 11-02-04, 11:43 AM   #19
Terse.
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Voted For: GangsStarShit

blah battle...

dflow...it's apparent you're a newb...cuz ya verse was newbish...no hate dawg, but u need to up ya game...ya shit was simply to basic, try and be more creative next time...and the worst part was your structure...you need to press enter after every line, it'll make ya shit look cleaner...

GS, u had a meh verse...but then again, i guess you didnt have to try that hard...punches were aight, not outstandin, but aight...stucture was decent....but anyways, i know you can do better than that...but nevertheless,

V/ GS for better overall verse (structure mainly)...