Thread
:
back again
View Single Post
07-25-02, 03:58 AM
#
2
Damani-DaGrinch
Guest
Posts: n/a
IP:
that was all right but theres a lot of room for improvement.....try to use a more complex rhyme scheme and that will make it sound a lot better.....other than that i think that you pretty strait....give some feedback on some of mah shit
Damani-DaGrinch