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Old 07-25-02, 03:58 AM   #2
Damani-DaGrinch
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that was all right but theres a lot of room for improvement.....try to use a more complex rhyme scheme and that will make it sound a lot better.....other than that i think that you pretty strait....give some feedback on some of mah shit
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