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Old 11-02-04, 06:07 PM   #14
LIL'DREW
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Voted For: illuson

Both were tite...nice wordplay...structure...multies...

illusion: betta overall verse...got his punches to the point...kept a good flow...good structure...

Freeze: good verse...took too much time with the punches...lines were just a lil' stretched...ur punches were aight...but they werent worth writing so many words...good structure though...
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