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Originally Posted by Anamasity
Somethin like this
Dezz niggas dont wonna feel my holo tips
Im bout 2 teach all of these niggas that my AK runs faster then they lips
And i aint Georgie Bush or John Kerry i dont need votes
Cause my bullet runnin down yo mouf and are more suver then strep throat
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saying votes and throat dont rhyme and you forced the 2nd line...and dont edit yer words like mouf its mouth dont fuck that up iight it throws people off...but yer stucture is a lil off make it like this:
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^^kinda like one straight line down the middle gives good shit...and yer punches need work but that will come in time after being here for a month or so...