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Old 11-02-04, 10:43 PM   #8
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Voted For: King~~Dipset

Okay...the breakdown
ill-basic rhyme scheme...in other words...shitty..elevate, use multis...definitely need to EXPAND your vocab..structure was a little of, but decent flow...but a shitty drop

King-Hez No NewB I Can really See Dat
But Call MChammer and make sure he getz He flow Bac
haha, thought that was pretty funny...anyways...nice punches..structure was on lock most the time...you need to expand ya vocab too...no noticeable wordplay or multis...but a nice drop

V/King
Reason:Better rhyme scheme...punches...overall better drop
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