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Old 07-25-02, 11:38 AM   #12
OFF~CeNTeR
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Both verses were really bad. To improve you need to...incorporate multis or inners into your verse...work on rhymeschem....DONT EVER USE CUM LINES....Creative did no tlive up to his name by using thge single most oplayed line ever..TwistedKilla won this because his flow was beter...he sucked less, his punches were more drect too...work on the complexity fellas....

and go vote on OFF~CeNTeR vs. IllRhymePhonetic