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Old 11-03-04, 02:24 PM   #9
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Voted For: Main

Aight lemme break this down fairly......

Main:
as a word spilla - mains illa than your whole gorilla faction
gory killer actions pft - overpower lines of sorry filla rappin
^^ ok open nice flow/multi's

doubt it, not on my level, you cant compare to this rhyme
punches knock ur back to the front like readin arabic lines
^^ lol nice i liked

you can kill n rape tons of people - n spread mad diseases
cause moneys the root of all evil, so your practically Jesus
^^ once again nice!

now look - at the best of times nameplays are weak n gay
but fuck your shit is below basic kinda like ya weekly wage
^^ aight

- i give you my all - while you deal with clowns and such..
you's a chain smoking faget always goin rounds with butts
^^ meh seen it a few times b4....

- face it kid - your wack and you'll never accomplish much
when i say your kinda Sweetish, i aint talking about dutch
^^ lol nice close

Wicked:
what the fuck you thinkin tryin to battle a CLOWN SO WICKED
ya shits so fuckin played, readin it just makes me sickend
^^ huh no

i cant even begin to tell you how much you suck so imma do ya a favor
imma grab my motha fuckin ax and send ya home to ya savior
^^^ nope

ya ever wanted to meet tha lord? heres ya chance to lice a dream
1 fuckin swing and ya necks a ruby red bloody stream
^^ maybe in audio ?

imma bring this shit quick to ya "main" brain waves
chop ya throat so many times ya die 37 differant ways
^^ wtf???

this shit will teach you to mess with the WICKEDCLOWN rhyme killa
lyrics to make ya head explode, they that much more illa
^^ lol no

look at ya self.. your a bloody mess and ya takin ya last breath of air
shouldnt have fucked with the "wicked revisited" not even on a dare
^^ bad close

okay my vote goes to Main
reason he actually used punch's an had a few witty concepts which he flipped very nicely, Wicked needs to elevate quite a bit an learn what wordplay/punch's are just because you make words rhyme doesnt mean its a good punch your verse woulda been better maybe in an audio but not in text battlin