Voted For: EastCoast

I'm gonna enter this battle with a strong mind but not a care
Evil eye, strapped up, teeth clench as the nostrils flare
^^^^ooook, and who really cares bout that, weak opener, 2/10
Rhymes leave you shooked up and teary eyed like a care bear
^^^mmmm, to much self hype. 3/10 dont like it
Can't believe you entered this match knowin' ya opposition
Kill you in two bars, rather than a composition,
^^^^meh, not bad, dont like it but theres nothing wrong with it, 5/10
You left daze as I lock and load to start ya conviction
Leave the audience stunned, my rhymes create sick addictions.
^^^^mmmm, pretty nice closer, 6/10

bro tainted, you got potential, but you use to much self hype, stop telling people how your the man and start mocking your oppostion, and get some humur into your rhymes.

TOTAL= 16/40

Your ma fucked up when she had u, she should've had an abortion/
Cuz' your raps is wack, much less, their outta proportion/
^^^mmm, good vocab, the first line is as old as the hills, but the second line isnt bad, average opener, 6/10
I drop so many golden tracks, they call me a hitman/
But everything you've ever written belongs in the trashcan/
^^^^haha, first line gay, second line was nice! 8/10
I leave wannabe MC's, rollin down da street, in lyrical hearses/
Wishing he could reimberse this, digging for spare verses/
^^^mmmm, good vocab, needed better delivery, 6/10
You aint tainted, your raps are fading, so get out of entertainment/
Your shit makes no sense like a porno that's PG-rated/
^^^HAAHA, funny, this was a good move putting some humur in your verse, this one it for you, you got good as potential kid! 8/10
If tightness is a disease, then my lines are diagnosed/
Face it, give up, or quit, you can't come close to EASTCOAST!
^^^weak closer, you should have just stopped after 8 lines, you win bro, TOTAL, 28/40 good verse here, i like your shit, its got some potential, keep doing what your doing.

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