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Old 11-04-04, 02:34 PM   #11
Terse.
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Voted For: Phyzicks

aight,
Phyz, definitely not a bad verse from u.....your punches and personals were decent...your structure was decent too, so the overal flow was good...plus u were consistent, good verese overall....

Joe.....wtf......ya verse was way too basic...i didnt see anythin outstandin in ya verse...there were no real punches or personals...n the structure was fucked up too...dawg, u've got a lot of elevatin to do...

V/ Phyzicks...