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Old 11-04-04, 04:27 PM   #19
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Viv
ya structure was fucked ya punches werent hittin and ya personals were damn near existint and ya meta's werent there
ya verse was kinda blah
u gotta work on makein it more consistent and ya punches harder and use some similies

Certified
ya structure was hella fucked
ya meta's were ok
but ya personals werent hitting hard enough
u had the slighter harder verse here
overall u got the win due 2 a lil harder punches


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