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Old 11-04-04, 09:40 PM   #7
Parallel
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Kontroversey:
hot verse ive seen better stucture from you but one of yer best lines with punches ive seen besides audio...good verse pretty damn full of complcatted shit sry about my spelling again...and your vocab none real to hard...but who cares about vocab..nice flow..and stucture...nuff said..

Kwell:
well for a kinda newb kinda not iunno not bad...punches werent realy to good but not bad other den that...stucture pretty good some forced lines witch threw it off a lil...good vocabulary..i have nothing else to say but keep elevating..

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