wow man that was a real serious piece i felt it all the way...def a lot of emotion in it...def doing ya thing you truely made me feel as if i had lost someone....again....and well i dont know how recent this happened to you but i recently last month lost 2 almost 3 close friends.....i have an open mic called R.I.P. if you wana peep that and teel me your thoughts thatd be tight.....but i think we should either do a poetry collab or just do a collab about the loss of someone with me you and capitol punishment cuz he went threw some messed up losses hit me up in pm or my aim sn to talk about it.....but nice peace flowed really well good vocab and overall i dont think it couldve been better....
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