that's kool... writing off top can be easy at times... and sometimes ya just wanna say what comes to mind... i guess that's the beauty of poetry... it comes in so many forms... keep doing ya thang man... as far as i'm concerned there is no "right" way to do poetry... just be yaself and if the emotion is there ya shyt'll be felt and reach the audience that it's meant to reach... yeah and thx for the feed on my joint... I'll holla!