uhhhhh.... i think ya might wanna work on ya concepts and ya wordplay a bit... ya verse was jumping all over the place... i thought you were talking about a female in the chorus... then you start spitting about how nice you are and ya cd is coming out and ya used some pretty wack lines in there also... no hate but i really hope you were just fooling around with this verse... it was extremely elementary and youngish sounding.... again, work on ya vocab, content, focus on ya topic and make it clearer to the reader,structure was ok but it barely made any sense with some of the stuff you were talking about.... try not to jump from one topic to the next... ya shyt should lead smoothly into the next line

ok...guess i'll "get off your case" now... peace... no hate ... just elevate