Voted For: VIvID

v/VIvID.
had the better verse,
structure was better, punches aswell.
syllable count was great too, made it flow well.
had the line of the battle. which was off the top line.

other guy needs to work on his structure.
some lines were madly stretched, drop the "" shit too.
work on creativivty, wittiness wins battles.

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