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The Tru Force Of Rap
From: In Bed With Your Girls Mouth On My Dick |
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hisTRYwrECKer why the Antic's ~ Ya Know How i Feel About Bitch-Shit, I Cant-Stand-It//
ya OppoZichun gets Damaged ~ the Wack Emcee's, just wreCKed-in-pHraNtiKs//
Ok opener.. Good multi
Ya Whole Verse Wasnt Big-Enough ~ Droppin Shit, Now Pick-It-Up//
It Looked Like Edward Scissor Hand Rollin-Up The Way i Slit-Ya-Up//
Decent punch
You Spittin Played Shit ~ How Many Times You Done Brought Up Bin-Ladin//
I Dont Give A Fuck What-You-Say ~ My Shit Would Be Iller Even In Pig-Latin//
lost the flow, but follow through bar was tight
YA Stepped Up To Battle With a Stiff aIM ~ then I Broke Ya Ankles//
If You Ever Became Phat and Measured Up ~ you Musta Broke-The-Angles//
lol
Like Clock-Work, Ya Times Fixed ~ AMEND Lays it Down, ya Hands-High//
want Truth, ya Ryhmes Shit ~ and this is UnConcluded so Stand-By//
not a bad ender[quote]
Over all pretty good verse.. only lost the flow once, good metaphors in it, Punchs were good but not that personal. Over all Like an 8 for a verse
hisTRYwreCKEr
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I'll spray lyrical vaccines on ur unknown land~but before that i'll leav u in tha crop//HAHA
Goin to a Six-Flags~Tha only way u'll make a decent drop//
good opener.. Sixflags part was nice
Makin u pop antiwackness pills~My bad they just advilz//
I'ma drop shyt on u like u da coyote~like 100 ton anvilz//
good, But the double Like things pissin me off,lol
Damn another white wanna be jockin slim shady~AND I THOUGHT STAN WAS KILLED//
Postin orgasisms in your rhymes, and porn as your cover~tha only way your listenerz get thrilled//
Lmao, that was dope
I'm pickin up my vocab outta my dictionary//
Wackness ain't that u~Oh shyt this my pictionary//blah
eh..
I'll leave this white boy sunburned wit hot lyrics like he surfed~like each and every//
Thought I was really gonna collab wit u!?!?!?~I just wanted to pick your gurlz cherry//
once again.. eh.. follow though bar was ok, begginer could been better..
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Over all about an 8 fora verse... Good metas, nice punchs..
Rhyme scheme was ok, vocab was ok..
1/2 an 5/6 bars were the ones that took it for me..
vote= hisTRYwreCKEr
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