Thread: SPuL vs L.I.
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Old 11-05-04, 07:31 PM   #3
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Voted For: SPuL

aight, L.I. has sum nice wordplay in his verse.. punches were eh... the part that was kinda off was the second bar, the last line..

Rep to the fullest son.. egos up there too, need tuh be saddled...
& SPuL will get into the RV Awards.. only cuz i came dope in this battle...(battle of the month)
^but the rest wasn't too bad.. u ended with a nice closer.. but point period you shoulda came harder..

SPuL- i haven't seen you battle in like 2 months.. but here's your critique, your closer wasn't the best of the two you, however, the macbeth metas were nice especially the opener.. lol you were original with the tic tac toe thing, but neither of you came hard.. the Pete Rose part was nice, hee hee good luck with this next time i expect both of you to come a lil' harder..

my vote./SPuL
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