Voted For: sabotage

yo you new to this site so you cant be too hard
the only time u pop slugs is walkin through wet grass in the dark
^^^^na, weak intro. dont like it
read the 'lyrics', this 'revelation' im killin
stomp on his head and leave more prints than a north carolina fitted
^^^^dont get it, and flow was really WACK
im sabotagin ur career of Michael Jackson like gay naughty games
this kids flows all over the place like kids who aint been potty trained
^^^^ideas were there, but it needed better execution!
ok u know u going to lose so jus sit there and pout
u wanna hit pussy? sure, knock urself out
^^^^LOL now that was a better line, good closer
after throwin this shit down i know youll want more///
ill pull an eminem and give you a fuckin encore///
^^^^mmm, average intro, good wordplay
ill leave u down bloodied beaten and battered///
from hearin my punches ur prolli sittin there sayin oh my reputation is shattered///
^^^^FLOW WAS WACK, na weak punch
you belong at the bottom my shit is first-rate///
your girl tell u she pulled a paris hilton and me and her...we made a sex-tape///
^^^^haha DRY, very weak punch, no meaning to it
so skip all your bullshit throw down some shit that is hot///
so you dont gotta be embarrassed by a kid on his first drop///
^^^^mmmm, pretty weak closer, you need to work on your flow and you punches are really quit dry, no hate

vote goes to sabotage. punches were a bit wack, but that last one, HAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAA ONG ROFLMAO!!!
veryy good!

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