Thread: Free Style To Haters!!!!
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Old 11-06-04, 02:58 AM   #4
LyRi-CaLi
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I will be honest and tell you this piece is weak. Need to use some better vocabulary and pick up the pace a bit.....
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Epic Thoughts Dont Be Surprised If Ya Eyes Get Damaged
I thought it was going to pick up there but it did not.....gj
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