Originally Posted by Chew187

Solid shit man 4 stars**** There were a couple of lines you should re-edit til you get it right but it does take talent as well as time to do this; If you put the time into it you can be a success!!!
Yo Yo Yo
i'm soft as a kitten my script aint writtin
I caught you beating off with your mommas oven mitten
i'll piss in yo mouth while you shit yo pants
passed out in seconds contempory trance
wake up wreck your method then do a dance
this is 4 the kids & it's time to take a glance
this aint that good but yo backs pinned to the matts
chewy is the best & thats just the facts
not too shabby now its time to kiss my ass
when I drop the beat the shit always lasts!
how was that?? i'm brand new to this site just trying to get some respect
it's no diss just some garbage to be analyzed