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Old 11-06-04, 09:06 AM   #5
~Lady Fiya~
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^the line that got this was the Fat Joe line.. nice wordplay in the closing bar too... DML didn't come hard at all, she had sum aight multis but the topics u talk about have no personals whatsoever, seems like ur battle verses have the same content in different words and when ya switched the style up (the end of your verse) it didn't help.. ma u gotta work on ya punches, lean back on the abridged vocab, and comin' harder in ya battles..

this line for example:
I got nothing to prove, you put a curse next to my name,
Callin me a bitch but putting ur own kind to shame,
^that was mo' of a punch to yourself.. second half- wasn't even a punch at all... ELEVATE ma, cuz this one's one sided..
Chaos, took this.. (eliminate ur intros)
pz
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