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lets break it down.

Draft you to the Detroit loins just so you know your losin/
To really make you sick I’ll give you a tainted blood transfusion/
^^^^sick lines are played, but a iight opener
My sharp punches will leave so many holes in you people will think you’re a pastor/
Break your keyboard just so you can’t type and you lose a little faster/
^^^^^^1st line could have been worded better, 2nd line was nice.
The number of fags ryding dick on this site is disgusting/
To prevent it this week I’m removing your genitals so now I can win/
^^^^^^Tight.....
You’d only drop hot shit if your boy friend gave you gonerria in the ass/
Throw you through a thin plate of glass and watch you bleed to death far from fast/
^^^^^^^Played
You can’t win plus there’s only one way to get a split decision/
That’s only if I slip while operating on you and make too long of a incision/
^^^^^^Nice, you need to shorten your bars kid.
Compare your shit to nursery rhymes and mother goose would be more complex/
You got weak volcab son using the same words over and over more then dmx/
^^^^^^^BLAH
I’ll bash you smash you and swell your eyes shut leave you with broken optics/
And your drops get slept on more then a room full of guys watching chick flicks/
^^^^^BLAH closer

On to the next.

This kid is constantly losing.. his skills need some serious schooling
He's a vet at RapBattles but he's still receiving daily bruisings
^^^^Nice opener
I'm a be this cat's undoing.. leave this kid with a record to laugh at
Spitting such played punches.. niggas see his verse and pass that
^^^^^BLAH
Begging Repitwa to give him a reset.. I got him dropping in sweat
I'm a lower this bitch faster than the stock market and the national debt
^^^^^iight, worded horrible, a lil effective
Your verse dates back the way I've read it on every board in existence
The way he recycles shit.. it's cause he's in need of assistance
^^^^^^iight
Reading his verse puts me to sleep in an instant.. so fuck this
I present a better verse in less than a minute.. and I do it legit
^^^^^^BLAH BLAH BLAH
So fuck this bitch.. my punches commit the way they leaven you hit
DirtyBoy added 69 to his name cause that's the only way he sees it
^^^^^^^OK, not really effective
You a bitch.. couldn't touch a pussy even though that's all he spits
Weak lines, kid.. I'm a break you and leave you wishin you could resubmit
^^^^^^BLAH closer

Vote~dirtyboy
Better punches and nicer wordplay, both need to practice though, and shorten ya damn lines yall.