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Originally Posted by Verbal Abuse
Voted For: Capital Punishment
Mike Hawk:
ya had good motives, ya personals were tight, but they werent punches, ya had no wordplay, they werent in the slightest bit funny, they kinda just stated the facts. ya need some structure going, overall not too bad, but get some structure and wordplay under ya belt.
capitol: good read, ya came good, i havent seen nothin from you in a while, but eh. ya came better than mh. ya had som egood punches and had some nice wordplay, ya structure was tight, and ya punches landed, and thats wat counts. word. congrats on this win.
vote : cap pun.
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