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Old 11-06-04, 06:44 PM   #25
LyRi-CaLi
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Voted For: illmatico

l0l vote goes to illmatico

Relish- What were you thinking?

"Cover her with buter, Make you jelous, Add some relish,
I merk you worse then your mom on ya bat,When shes finished,"
-Your rhyme was off and on.....Would go and freeze up go and freeze...which never got me into the flow. Seemed like you just wanted things to rhyme didnt care about the quality of your writing.

Illmatic- The flow wasnt sick, but I felt it more the above. The punches were better and not as preschool. Still the quality was not that great. BUt since I have to vote it goes to you ill.
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