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Old 11-06-04, 08:40 PM   #27
For$akeN
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social outsyder: nokay drop not the greatest but still nice
1st bar was kind of good but at the same time played I don't really like "shit" lines of any sort. 2nd bar was was okay had a aggressive/effective feel to it. 3rd bar was nice but you started it off with self-glorification and i don't like that kind of stuff at all in verses.....that aren't mine 4th bar was self-glorification all the way through and didn't even help the verse much at all. 5th bar was confusing honestly you keep on using words that have "deep" in it constantly but wordplay was in there. 6th bar decent! overall: 6.5/10

dopeman: decent at best......
i'm not gonna do a line by line review because it's too long but i'll sum it up. First off the entire verse was stretched and that wrecked it up the opener didn't do much for you barely.
closer was a weak one but personal helped. the middle got retarded and you completely lost this battle once you did the "momma" line which to me is the most played line in the book honestly....overall: 5/10

vote: genocide
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