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Old 11-06-04, 09:34 PM   #14
TitoBronsky
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vote: Kwell


my man had better flow......... i couldnt see any rhyme scheme in kon's verse...... and a lot of the subject matter was recycled. ( aids punches and so on )
also, i just felt you had a lot of fluff in your verse.


Kwell had a couple of decent laughable punches

example:
I'ma throw punches wit accuracy, hit this fool in the head
this hoe only pulls dirt^
.........so from what i saw, he aint the sharpest tool in the shed
* funny opener*

i'ma crush this kid--wit no slip-ups or problems involved
put his voicebox in his mom's puss,
........since this loner's already got the habit of talkin ta' walls
* another laughable punch*


kon i just couldnt see where you were going wit anything....... nothing rhymed.... even if you tryed to strecth it..... couldnt find the flow... you've dropped better than this......


vote: Kwell


stay up the both of yall niccas.



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