Voted For: Dabatos
Dabatos - Good verse, your flow was good.. and you had a good structure.
Best Line -
[The End]
It's been 1 year since that event, and half the country has been wiped out...
I have no family alive now, and geting rid of this disease i have high doubts...
At times I cry about, how i could of saved my family from takin that shot...
Because that shot was givin by terrorists, which was never to be stopped...
Worst Line - The death rate is over ten thousand innocents, only killed in one week,
Syptoms are from unkown scars to scratches dat makes someone bleed...
Which will end up making one weak, to the point that they can't even see..
Bleeding out of their eyes, if this happens then they got the unkown disease..
Elemental Soul - iight spit, you had some good flow.. and a good vocab.
Best Line - Stuck in poverty,causing the animosity of honesty,
So obviously,our only hopes are winnin the lottery,
Worst Line - I speak to the lord,hoping he'll answer me with a miracle,
We must learn through parables,our lives are just unbearable,
OVERALL - good topical battle, but I gotta give this to Dabatos, he had a better flow for topic.. and a better way of typing it. Ele your shit was iight, you just need to work on some more creative shit.
vote - Dabatos
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