alright, i peeped up a couple of your tracks and i see you have potential. the one peice of advice i could offer you is that you need to learn to count your bars better homie. alot of it seems rushed to me and off key so you can't realy get your point across. i dunno if you freestyle on the regular or not, but (i've had this problem too) if you got rhythem when you come off the top, and go to paper and cant stay on que, just take whatever beat you're doin a track too and, instead of writing to it, just freestyle to it for a minute and write down what sounded dope to you and record it, blaow! it all stays on que.

hope this advice helps you out.

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