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Old 11-07-04, 11:33 AM   #12
Terse.
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Voted For: Elemental Soul

aight,
Elemental, decent verse from u here....didnt see any personals, but u had decent punches n u were consistent eit them...nothin that made me say 'dayum!' but i liked seein that u had a different approach wit some concepts....structure was on point too...

Tainted, u had a meh verse....structure was prolly the only thing goin for u here, dawg....u had punches n u were consistent, but they were basically all sex/gay jokes n shit...if u had been more creative u prolly woulda gotten my vote here...

V/ Elemental, for more overall creativity...