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Old 11-07-04, 03:36 PM   #17
hang-man
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From: RV Pit-Bull Dont Fuck With ME!!
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Im doing break down....

Verbal
U thinking ur a 'step' a'head' is funny, u a joke, i stomp on skulls for a living
None of ya punches r hitting, u blaze a page...readin ma verse 'n' skimming
this was hot

I be the reaper, watch as u try and inhale words of fury, take a breather
I'll take out ya speaker, To light up ya life, take rv 'n' spark up the heater
just flowing

You bin here for awhile, but u aint even a vet, more like you were new
In this battle, you should already be dead, like the inactivity of ya crew
nice personal

Honestly, this isn't tha life to suitya, take up trombone n get a tutor
Kids perverted, he think that playin wit big guns is playtime at hooters
ha nice diss, feeling the flip

Think u a star?, I'm godly wit infinite forms of rap, so u overlooking clouds
Don't shout ur verse isn't a big deal, Like tryna find a birthday party clown
this ending was weak thou but nice verse,

8.0


Nygma
This cat's easily trash........enough to overflow a land fill
But Verb keeps words in motion....while his verse is still a stand still
good opener

This cat bringing fire?.....Well I guess he's got sterno
Kid, I'll knock your fucking lights out and have you going nocturnal
nah this was weak aint flow good either

I'm probably the oldest on this site... ya still need to have protection
Cause I'll shove my cane up your ass and give you a staff infection
this shit was the weakest bar i have ever seen * straight trash *

I'm miles ahead.....how dare you try to come spit em with me
I mean shit......he writes in small text cause he's got little to see
concept was decent but the line need it to be re-worded to flow smother so still it wasnt a good bar

It's over, nighty night.....guess it's time to check out ya whore
Can't beat me straight up.....so he tried to make it best out of four
Ok closer …
ok ending but u need it alot more fire and more punches

6.0

vote: verbal

P.S i dont know what the fuck ya been reading in the other guys verse but i think ya dick ryder seriously this should be a easy win for verbal and dont hate fuckers cuz im expressin my rights of freedome of speach its the truth RE-READ THE VERSE AND TELL ME WHO REALLY WON

dont worry verbal i know there is mad haters out here i can tell but keep droping ya fire dogs