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Mike:
This kid is shitty, taste in music is silly.
I mean seriously, who the fuck listens to diddy?
good opener, but ppl do listen to diddy. not funny
Answer the question, its fairly easy duke........
Nobody! Well that's why I can tell why you do.
dont answer your own punch, player
On the real, quit rap, you'll never get a deal....
Homeless kids dig through your battle stats just to get a meal.
lmao, nice one. good wordplay
Garbage? Yes, how I'm gonna respect you now.
When last time we were scheduled, you no-showed clown.
stop answering ya punch, and never end a line with a pronoun.
Scared of the kid, your crew's full of faggots and they all shit.
A.I. like pirates?....I'm bout to put them through hardship.
it rhymed, but didnt flow.
You a faggot, That be on RapVerse all night.
I'll just report this mod, so I can end ya life.
i dont get it.
Schema:
i coulda ate your flower ass with my baby teeth
and i would feed.....
.................but i dont ever eat grade d beef
good.
if i described you in two words all id say is "mike's soft"
plus your on my nuts so much.....
.............................that your name is my cock...
god like
to say youre dope is a joke...to say youre not wack is stretchin...
you only win off bullshit fl votes...
...................................kinda like the election...
lol, great structure.
obviously the skill drop between me and you drops deep...
cause my crew dont want you...
............................but your crew'd sure want me...
got the punch, needed some wordplay.
id rather battle cream of the crop than the wack of the wack...
youre like darren sharper...
..........................you stand at the back of the pack...
lmao @ this line.
how'd you get a rep from your ego? ive got ta find out...
yeah your cocky...
................but you got nothin to be cocky about...
closure was a punch, but again no wordplay.
vote: schema
better structure, rhyme scheme, and vocab. harder punches, blah.
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quote your own damn lyrics...
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