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Old 11-07-04, 10:07 PM   #17
Ike
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Voted For: Elemental Soul

this was a very close battle....

vocab was good from both of u....good multis from both of u.....elemental had more inners which i thought made it a lot more interesting to read....structure was good from both of u....but i thought elements was a bit better......i felt that some of dabatos lines were stretched.....dabatos was easier to understand but i thought that it was a bit too easy and understandable....it was too simple......honestly element...when i read this....it was like i was reading one of the best pieces of work i have ever read....it was truly a great verse....not that dabatos wasnt good....but i just think that element got him pretty easy on this one...
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