Voted For: Kwell

(x) Ced
bad structure = bad flow.. you had a lot of noob lines and played punches... didn't have much of a rhyme structure either and nothing was well worded or put together, overall you could of done a lot better.. or maybe not? keep it up.

Kwell
saw some ok/decent lines.. sum played, like the bird concept and some other one, but you did not have to come that hard to win... its obvious you did as good as what was needed.. making it clear you won.

Vote: Kwe;;