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TRAVEZTY
I have immortal thoughts and flows some consider unorthodox//
comin off the top I.E are u sure u really want this boy to talk?//
SORTA A WEAK OPENER MAN,SETUP WAS COOL,I FELT YOU COULD OF CAME ALOT HARDER WITH THE PUNCH
Like a pimp I order you to stop, your like the typical whore onthe corner block//
always on my cock dick jockey im tellin u now ull never be hard as a rock//
OK HERE,NOT REALLY FEELING IT,A LITTLE TO STRETCHED MAN,NOT HITTING HARD EITHER
You're like an active environmentalist, you do so much recycling
Write your verse so it glows bright, it still wouldn't be enlightning//
NOT HARD HITTING AGAIN,NOTHING DOING IT FOR ME HERE,NOT EFFECTIVE
u lost try again later dyin is nature u saw the light then ate the lifesaver//
So cue the violin playa an say ya goodnight prayors cuz u steppin to me is a joke like mike in the majors or hikin with strangers//
SETUP NOT GOING WELL WITH THE PUNCH,FILLER MAN BOO AT YOU,UMM THE PUNCH WAS WAY TO STRETCHED I LOSSED MY BREATH ALSO..lol
you wont win son stop ya dreamin ima monstrous demon//
incredible?believe it ona pedistool im seated TRAVEZTY a super intellectual bein//
NOT FEELING IT
If You really is a vet, end of story, I can't cut that deep//
You and real vets got one thing in common-u both put cats to sleep//
OK,NOT EFFECTIVE THOUGH
im the musical HE-MAN re-programing ure mental state on weekends//
its like ure sinking in quicksand and ure only grip is a tree branch//
NOTBAD,ALSO NOT TOO HARD
Let me tell u sumthin- get out my face ure fronting//
and all ya rhymin is jus a waste of production- cuz u remind me of a mime never sayin nuthin//
BLAH AT THIS,NOT FEELING IT
I respect-you-lots, but u felt-trapped, so you came at me ya hardest//
But ya flowz lack important stats, ya handicapped, I.E. u know who gon’ make it the farthest?//
NOT TOO BAD AGAIN,NOT EFFECTIVE SHIT ,A LITTLE STRETCHED ALSO
Like a pyramid I break you down step-by-step so forget-your-rep because you know it won't get-respect//
Cuz like lil kids in a swimming pool, you are out-of-your-depth//
NOT REALLY A GOOD ENDING,NEED TO COME HARD HERE,I TELLYOU FOOLS ALL THE TIME TO COME HARD AT THE BEGINNING AND END,NOONE LISTENS,OH WELL GOOD BATTLE
I.E.
Never beat i.E Recently All These Rappers Want A Piece Of Me
Cuz I Take Rocks & Smash Their Window Of Opportunity Easily
GOOD OPENER,FLIPPED THE WINDOW OF OPPORTUNITY WELL,IVE SEEN IT USED ALOT THOUGH LATELY BUT PRETTY GOOD
Your Not Decent B, Flaws Nobody Saw At All Cuz They Hate It
While I`ll Leave You More Down Under Then Australian Natives
PRETTY PLAYED CONCEPT MAN,SETUP COULD OF BEEN BETTER ALSO
Debate What I’m Saying, Stop Or Else You’ll Rot In The Rubble
Your Girls Clit Was A Problem & It Seems I’ve Got Into Trouble
MADE ME LAUGH,WASNT REALLY A HARD PUNCH,BUT DECENT SHIT
Flew The Coop Was Subtle, And You Best Ta` Realize You Lost
Going To Be Jogging Your Memory, To Exercise Your Thoughts
GOOD SHIT
You Oughta` Quit Bitch, You Think I’m Dope And I’m Guessing
My Daggers Are Witness’s, And Your Heart Is Open To Question
AGAIN GOOD FLIP,PLAYED ALSO,BUT EFFECTIVE SHIT HERE
So, Bro Why You Stressing Me? Your Wife Is A Whole Lotta Girl
You’re Winning This? That’s Out Of The Picture, Like A Photographer
NICE AGAIN,NOT TOO HARD THOUGH
Yo..I’m Tired Of The Future, And Travis – The Past Wont Haunt Me
Travis Sees Pussy & Ass? Only When Looking At Cats & Donkeys
DECENT SHIT HERE,SORTA CREATIVE SHIT
What The Fuck Were You Thinking Guy? If You Blink You Die
I’ll Paint A Picture…
And Use Your Bones As Brushes And Blood As My Ink Supply
GOOD VISUAL,I LIKE SHIT LIKE THAT,GOOD PUNCH
On The Brink Of Rhymes, Travis..Don’t Ever Test A Vets Skills
You Couldn’t Run The Show, Putting Sitcoms On Treadmills
NOT REALLY FEELING THIS
I`ll Take This Teen, And Find Some Way To Break His Spleen
Could Become A General Manager & Still Not Make The Team
DECENT ENDING,EFFECTIVE NOT HARD AS HELL THOUGH
BOTH HAD GOOD VERSES,BUT ONE HAD THE BETTER VERSE AND IE GETS MY VOTE
VOTE IE,I THOUGHT HE HAD MORE CREATIVE PUNCHES,AND HARDER ONES AS WELL,TRAVEZTY I THINK YOU NEED TO SETUP YOUR PUNCHES A LITTLE BETTER BE MORE CREATIVE
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