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Old 11-08-04, 06:56 PM   #11
For$akeN
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Voted For: GangsStarShit

..Xplicit..: 1st bar was poo....it was played as hell and wasn't very effective at any point. 2nd bar= was pointless made sense to me a bit but again non-effective. 3rd and final bar was.......played once again...did you even try?

GangsStarShit: 1st bar was pretty good actually it had a nice personal that helped you a lot with a nice opener and effectiveness. 2nd bar was okay i liked the wordplay with his names in the first line 2nd line of it was was decent though you should of flipped it over. final bar was nice nice helped you.....

vote: i think gangstarshit got this one...
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