Voted For: Phyzicks
phyz
ok, nothing eye opening, but you had connecting punches.. the 'deliever/paper' concept is kinda played.. your verse wasn't all that great.. but enough to win.
young
bad flow/structure... it seemed like your first half your verse didnt even rhyme! threw off everythig and I couldn't feel the punches you were trying to throw because there was nothing to go off of.
Return the favor please.
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