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Old 11-08-04, 10:40 PM   #11
Terse.
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Voted For: th-C

aight,
th-C, ya verse was straight...the structure was on point, so it flowed well...u had nameplay personals that were good...i didnt think that the punches were as strong, but they still had decent concepts behind 'em....overall, good consistency...

Joey, ya verse was okay...structure was decent, but still could use some work...i saw that u had nameplay personals too, which were good...but u seemed to really lack strength/creativity punchwise...u had good consistency, but overall, u came too basic...

V/ th-C, for better overall verse...