Voted For: VIvID

certified
seemed like a freshly noob written verse.. you need to purely elevate through experience.. theres no doubt you lost this one, try to be more complex and think of better lines, even if it take you more time.

Vivid
basically your first bar took it.. everything was well consistent.. the structure is meh, but overall I felt your verse was more complete and hard hitting.. giving you the win.

Please return the favor and hit up any battle currently in sig.