Only the Illist
From: your worst nightmare |
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Voted For: sabotage
aight this battle was way lopsided... someone got SONED and imma break it down for yall right quick
Sabatoge- good verse. punches and personals hit fairly hard and the wordplay was tight, wasnt a fan of the structure but other than that it was pretty tight, good on the creativity side as well homie 7/10
young one- overall bad verse, wanna know what ruined it? wack structure, very very wack structure... ya had some ok punches and a personal or 2. wordplay was...iffy and creativity was...aight... overall ya gotta elevate altleast on the structure.... 4/10
no hate to the young one but homie ya need elevation on that structure and on ya wordplay... not a hate vote at all this is just how i see it homie... sabatoge you had a pretty tight verse, would have been better if ya structure was on lock but the rest of it was tight, i was feelin it, especialy ya opener....overall good verse homie!
VOTE- SABATOGE........................................
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