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Old 11-08-04, 11:25 PM   #8
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Voted For: Lyriclesolja

soon as i saw his record i knew he was in fo a KO,
even his OM's are wack and he could pre-write those,
^nice bar... lmao

^lyrical had the harder verse.. he had punches a lil' bit of hilarious stuff here and there.. the nik nak part wasn't too fascinating but original cuz how many people's verses do u see it in..? none.. but uhmm you got on his open micz.. lol and the gay part was hilarious but your endin' should be as strong as your opener if not more.. blackwell you had sum aight punches in your verse but the brackets mess up your flow.. you took his name in ur verse, nice personal but you structure was kinda off.. well both of y'alls were but lyricle had the better flow.. blackwell work on your punches and adding wordplay, you have nice metas but u need to put that shit together..

my vote/ lyricle good luck and pz..
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