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Old 11-09-04, 11:48 AM   #15
Know-Gimix
The Ups and Downs of Life
 
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I never said you came harder... if you were reffering to me...


Raps need skill...you stink...somethin u'll never grasp,
So u say more than 1 wack word it still don't mean u multi-task,
funny ass bar... tell me theres no punch there-- second line hits hard.

Ya shit slacks like lax* ya audios at best disgraceful so why bother,
So it's gettin warmer in Canada...don't mean u gonn get hotter,
the slacks like lax was dookie-- but rest of bar was nice... personal diss on first line, funny little punch second line...
Ya overrated wit a style thats outdated face it u faded go to ya wife,
Coz right where this ends is where you start...to suck at life,
I found that shit funny as hell- very well researched personal, good humor... my fav 3 bars from GangStarShit....

I said ur structure fucked up readin it for me, cuz it did- by usin that structure I think your lines went on forever so I couldn't get super comfortable--- my favorite bar from you...

All i have to say is he free'd his verse in 6 minutes...
Thats laughable because this whole site knew I won..
.....................................before he even finished...

It was funny-- decent punch, in this bar I think your structure aided in the delivery, but in other bars From the same verse ur shit seems stretched out and that matters alot to me... need an example???....

Your wack face it before you answer to any more posts...
You should go the www.playedverses.com instead of rv...
...........because I hear they have your fave icp as hosts...
say that shit to a beat and actually match it--- it aint happenin... www.playedverses.com is like 15 syllables on its own.... sorry if My shit wasn't explained enough but shit I thought you knew me.
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