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Old 11-09-04, 01:06 PM   #24
~Lady Fiya~
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Voted For: ReQuiem

Ima Have to Propel Golden Shell's To Shatter Ya Frame,
Tear Every Line You Produce,Have Ya wallowing In Shame,
Ill Prize Ya Chest Cavatie's from Ya Rib's & Douse Em In Gasoline
Frantic Crie's Echo Out Ya Windpipe,Wheezing Like U Addicted Ta Nicotine
^ur first two bars was enuff to get back at golden shells.. nice lmao.. ur structure was aight, but ur flow was on point.. golden shells u didn't come hard enuff u had a couple of personals here and there but u didn't hit him as hard as he did you.. for the better punches and better vocab i give it to ReQuiem.. good luck with this.. this ya girl fiya.., i'm out..

pz..
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