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Old 11-09-04, 04:54 PM   #25
Willa
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
 
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Voted For: Dabatos

dabtos i thought urs was more complex overall i felt es's verse had quite a few played lines i was feeling ur structure i like how u broke it into seperate peices and ur lines were really ever
i personally think ur ending was great
It's been 1 year since that event, and half the country has been wiped out...
I have no family alive now, and geting rid of this disease i have high doubts...
At times I cry about, how i could of saved my family from takin that shot...
Because that shot was givin by terrorists, which was never to be stopped...

however i wasnt really feeling this part right herer
After two more months of fear, it's said no people has had the infection....
Death rates have lessend, but 2 be sure, everyone must get an anti-injection..

elemental soul ur verse was good ur flow was better than dabatos but i felt hers was more complex more creative and had a better structure

this line was really good nice multis flowed goo and its really true
Stuck in poverty,causing the animosity of honesty,
So obviously,our only hopes are winnin the lottery,

i wasnt feelin this line its really played
I want the ones who struggle to unite,fight for your piece,
I want Crips to shake the hands of Bloods,cutting your leash,

ok so im gonna give it to dabatos es had a better flow but thats about it his lines were played dabtos was more creative her structure was better also but good battle to both

vote - Dabatos
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