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Old 11-10-04, 01:32 AM   #80
~Lady Fiya~
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Voted For: oreo

surgical had a better opener.. oreo i liked how u gradually came harder HOWEVER, the beginning should not be a weak spot, ya feel me.. your personals were kinda funny too, the last bar was kinda funny with the e.r. thing.. u had better vocab... i question if either of u seen one another's verses cuz i seen the table and able thing.. maybe it's a coincidence.. but anywayz, u had a decent structure and content to take surgical.. this was a close battle but oreo took this..

so that's my vote.. good luck with this pz..
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