a loss is in your future, but dont get upset man
creative? fuck no...
i predicted every one of his punches in my fucking check in

^^^^^ Clever...
he's got the knicks in his avy & thats just bad
kids on my dick, so its easy to see im bound
that of course i cause trouble...
cuz kontroversy always seems to follow me around

^^^ No...elementary booooooooooooooooooooooo


"how to quit putting quotes to emphsize a punch because i cant construct a decent one so people wont notice how wack i am"
.... followed up by "how not to bold and use funny signs"


^^ This does not flow well...it just sound, or "reads" like you're talking...I got quite uninterested in your verse by this point. That's a shame because it started off nicely.


14/20

First Line, I thought i'd Spit some personals Against him,
......But he did it himself...
Like Short Wrestlers Competing in Ladder Matches,
.....Your missin' the belt...



^^FLow is nice...creative punch, though not hard hitting


"S-dizzle"? You and Snoop Dogg have reverse complications,
....Your diagnosed with a "Diet" Disorder...
The Only attractin Line you ever been through,
......Was crossing the American Boarder..


^^Not sure the diet connection was made...but ur flow is killin S dizzle


I stay in a Godly Position, So making it to heaven,
......you gotta get through me first... (impossible)
You couldn't "bone shit" even if you jumped off your roof,
.....and Landed Knee first...

^^^^^Decent closer


Vote: Kontro: Way better flow (which I'm a fan of), more complex set ups to pinches, and more dynamice rhyming


Vote: KON


PERIOD.