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Old 07-27-02, 09:48 AM   #9
RealizE
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6th vote.....

IS the joke? The Challenger is Dalyricalwhiz,
step to me and win? isnt that what a myrical-is?//
^^^^^iight opener
The rhyme ripper gets reamed by my rap rhapsodies,*
rapidly wreapin weak rappers removin parodies//
^^^^^ummmm i dont know
Arrogantly, my verse is workin, the loss is lurkin,
DLW so desperate for ass, even his avatar is Jerkin!//*
^^^^^lolz nice...
Think Ds goin gold-right w/ gold-writes cuz you usin bold-type,
And I fold-bites you got no style, break your mold-dyke!//
^^^^^^not feelin it
Used to be the former whiz? what happened Howser?
told him Id rip his ass and he dropped his trousers!//
^^^^^iight
Like Narc's-in-tents he used to have Dark-Intent,
But no more, now this loner battles a free agent//*
^^^^^^iight
it must be tough, no one ever thinks of your verse highy,
only time a voter drops their jaw...is when they click on smily//*
^^^^^^lmao, nice
How is this competing with the Middleweight God?
hes only been in VVV once....and it was to suck Moneybags rod!//*
^^^^iight closer

Next....

im bout to off this beginner, often u spit bitter,
blend up ya purple pillz, yous a xtc drinker
^^^^^ehhhh
damage u amatuer, damn animal farm scriptures,
only dr. dolittle can translate ya wack lyrics
^^^nice punch but didnt rhyme
infact, u more pussy than a room full of kittens,
ya verbal attack is wack punches hitten soft, as if u was wearing mittens
^^^^^^nice
i smack u hard, like a bear claw, all in ya jaw,
off shaken n slurred similar to parkinsons
^^^^^ummmm no
i got niggaz that steal cars, watch where u parkin-son
on sum grand-theft-auto shit snatchin u outta ya car
^^^^^nah
off center, fake thug, yous an off killa, a kit kat, a four bar spitter
u more wacker than virgin wit blue ballz jackin off at a masterbation center
^^^^^played but nice
im past beginner off sinner, ya wack trash i burn it-you've earned it-cremate ya mass now ya nickname-urnest-
for-certain, u couldn't be hot on the mic, if the studio was burnin
^^^^^^iight
or more elevated, if u spit off top a building with 30 stories
^^^^^BLAH closer.

Vote-Off center
better punches and wordplay put into his verse.