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11-10-04, 01:17 PM
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LyRi-CaLi
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This was a decent piece.
Wordplay was good, your vocab was good, few good metas.
The only down side was some of your verses did not make to good of sense but overall this was decent........change the view.....dont just flaunt your self
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